holy... !@#$ your first flash?
No way, I ain't believing it! Nice job! Note the fact that I'm giving this a long review is because I look up to it. Anyway, pros and cons -
1. Graphics - incredible! THe characters were AWESOME, and the frames went quite smoothly! The animation itself is a wonder if you're a beginner at flash like you said.
2. I LOVE the music, it fit very well with each scene, and speaking of scenes, you were smart enough to make different points of views. GREAT
cons -
unfortunately, nothing's perfect, below I've listed some things I think you can improve on .
1. PLOT!!! DAMN IT, all good flashes NEED PLOT. It's not a matter of choice, it's MANDATORY. There was basically not plot, or strictly speaking, very little.
2. please, for !@#$ sake, do NOT mix real life graphics with cartoon graphics. I don't like blurry things mixing with solid color. It hurts my eyes.
3. The characters need a bit more shading.
anyway, good stuff. I hope to see more! Good luck with your future productions, I await your next project. Perhaps I'll even add you to favorites. You sure do have the potential.